Once a Kings Fan Too
Rejoint: juin 2018
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Welcome to CapFriendly! Sometimes, it's not too friendly.
As a first effort, this one isn't terrible. We've all done worse at the outset of our experience on this site!
The very first error is in your Team Explanation: your last sentence should read, "Thank you for looking at this, all courteous feedback is appreciated!"
Seriously, your Montreal trade is very close, and you correctly identified the possible objection to it in the trade box. You should know that several Montreal fans have offered Dvorak, Kidney and the Florida first in trades for DuBois, so that idea with the qualification is right on.
Los Angeles doesn't need centers, or any forwards, for that matter. (We have 14 of them under team control on the roster right now.) Moreover, the Kings wouldn't consider trading Byfield or Clarke, who are considered future franchise cornerstones. The only Jet in whom Los Angeles would have the slightest interest is Josh Morrissey, but he has a NMC and Winnipeg probably would have no interest in moving him.
Keep trying, and don't be discouraged!