With the exception of Heiskanen, and maybe Dahlin (he does not know whether he wants to be consistently good defensively or not), Slavin is better than every LD man here.
I wouldn't have Connor, Morrissey or Karlsson here, pretty solid list though. I would suggest Stutzle > Connor, Slavin > Morrissey, Pietrangelo > Karlsson.
Draisaitl over MacKinnon, Marchand and Vasilevskiy should be lower, but otherwise your ordering is fine.