That blues trade is laughably bad
It might get you paraykos broken sticks if your lucky

Easy no for the blues. We are not retaining on Parayko and none of those pieces are interesting for us to trade him for.

Bruh, at absolute most you've barely paid for the retention you're never getting from the Blues. Parayko is not available, and if he was this offer gets lapped.

Nope

That’s an easy no for the Hawks. The two LHD would be of no
Interest due to Chicago’s organizational depth at that position. Three and half seasons of Campbell’s $5m cap hit will be costly to move and retaining 50% on Mrazek only adds to the overall price.

I would counter with:

To Edmonton - Mrazek 50% retained, Isaac Phillips

To Chicago - Campbell, Holloway, Akey, 2024 1st round pick, 2025 1st round pick

I think your offer is a bit lop sided in CHI's favor, but, yeah, there would definitely need to be more going to CHI.

You are probably right, you could remove Akey from the proposal or drop the 2025 1st to a 2nd.

Hey, I've done it a lot before, too... A LOT! haha. Whenever I get offended by someones offer or they are being a prick for seemingly no reason, I tend to put the pedal to the metal in the other direction.