Not bad overall, but some details lead it to fall short. You're underpaying Campbell (he's going to command more than 4mil), Yamo (just scored 20 goals; min. 2.5mil), and Kulak (shallow UFA LD market; he'll get ~3mil); overpaying Pitlick (he's a 12th-14th F; not worth more than 800k); and you didn't do anything with Puljujarvi.

Question, why on earth would you want kane for 5 years? he’s 30 years old and plays a physical style, will it be the same in 4-5 years? when he’s 35? I don’t think so.

Yamo doesn’t sign for 1.5m.

0 point in signing a backup when skinner is ready for that role and better than tokarski anyways.

Pitlik and Russell are only worth league minimum, if they are worth signing at all.
Kulak is going to get at least 2.25 mill per
Hyman is a shoots right so he woud be played on the RW before Holloway would.
Kassian on the first line is not happening, hes most likely gone next yr.
Yamo wont sign for anything less than $2.5 mill per.
Campbell wants $5mill x 5 yrs.